查人人中国名人网电视剧暗哨暗哨第九集:有一篇英语作文,希望帮我改一改错的地方.
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1.教学楼位于学校中间，6层楼。
2.三楼有一个大阅览室，两个微机房和三个科学实验室。
3.大楼前面有一个大花园。
4.二楼有一个语音室（sound lab）
5.从一楼到到二楼有12间教室。我们的在二楼。
Hello,Jack.Our teaching building is very good.Let me tell you.Teaching building is in the middle for the school.It has six floors.The third floor has a big reading room ,two computer rooms and three science labs.We have computer lessons in computer rooms,we all like computer lesson You can read lots of books in reading room,there are many books in it .There is a garden in front of the teaching building .The second floor has a sound lab .There are 12 classrooms from the first floor to the second floor.Our classroom is in the second floor.
"Teaching building is in the middle for the school.It has six floors"改为The teaching building sits in the middle of our campus with six floors.
"The third floor has a big reading room ,two computer rooms and three science labs."改为：On the third floor are a big reading room ,two computer rooms and three science labs
"We have computer lessons in computer rooms,we all like computer lesson ”最好在中间加and连接．
”You can read lots of books in reading room,there are many books in it"重复累赘，改为：We can read different types of books,magazines and newspapers in the reading room.因为前面用的是We have computer lessons in computer rooms,we all like computer lesson，这里也最好用we.
”There is a garden in front of the teaching building .The second floor has a sound lab”改为：In front of the teaching building is a big garden where there are different kinds of flowers.且这句应放在最后，因为其他介绍的都是教学楼里面的情况,或放在”The teaching building sits in the middle of our campus with six floors.”后面也可，这样顺序就为由外到里．
”The second floor has a sound lab ”改为There is a sound lab on the second floor.
"Our teaching building is very good.Let me tell you"最好省略．开头用：Let me tell you something about the teaching building.
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Hello,Jack.Let me introduce the teaching building to you .Teaching building is in the middle of the school which has six floors.The third floor have a large reading room ,two computer rooms and three science labs.We have computer lessons in computer rooms and we all like this lesson You can read books in the reading room because there are a lot of books in it .In front of the teaching building,there is a beautiful garden. We ofen read English there in the morning.And sound lab is on the second floor .There are 12 classrooms on the first floor and the second floor in totel.Our classroom is on the second floor.