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My English teacher is a middle-aged woman.She is elegant and works hard.Though she is strict sometimes, we all love her.In general,she is a good teacher.

In my eys/opinion, she is well-informed and eloquent,and I wish I could be like her.In her class, she often tells us something about life and society,and I learn a lot in her class.

I got interested in Enlish at the begining of my English study.I found that English sounds beautiful. It is useful and important.Mastering English will make our life more colorful.

If I succeed in the exam,of course,I will attend my colledge. Otherwise,I'll encourage myself to work harder,try my best to improve it.

注意人称！是男的还是女的。用了though,就不要再用but！个别的拼写也要注意。另外，不要在in a word后面写一连串的words,which will drive the techer crazy.所以，还是尽量少用in a word这个短语——如果之后你不是只用一个词来说的话。

My English teacher is a middle-aged woman.She is elegant and works hard.Though she's strick sometimes,but we all love her.In a word,she is a good teacher.
She is learned and eloquent,which I wish I could be very much.What's more,I can learn much in her class,in which she tells us something about life and society.
I became interested in English when I started studying English.I found that it sounds beautiful.Also,it's useful and important.Mastering English will make our life more colorful.
If I succeed in the exam,of course ,I will attend the college.On the contrad,I'll encourage myself to work harder and try my best to do it again.