查人人中国名人网日本国旗高清:有谁愿意帮我修改一下英文简历,谢谢!!
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Contact Info
Name: Lin Zhiyu (Chinese)
Alex Lin (English)
Address: NO.1 , Lane 11 Chaoxing Road , Chongwu,
Quanzhou , Fujian ,China (Home)
lsxw520@hotmail.com (E-Mail)
Postal Code : 362131
Mobile Telephone : 13599902024
Date of Birth : Mar.14, 1984
Sex : Male
Age : 23
Martial Status : Single
Height :173cm
Health Condition：Strong
Hobbies : English ,Taekwondo
Major : International logistic Management
Job Objective:
logistics and International trading ,etc
Education:
2003-2006 : Diploma in logistics at the Navigation
College of Jimei University, Xiamen
Profession level :Logistician
2000-2003: NO.7 Secondary School , Quanzhou
Working Experience:
Summer vacation ,2005 :The intern for the international trading department at
the Fujian meizhouwan chlor –alkali industry CO., Ltd
Mar.--Jun .2006:The director for Spoken English training at the Navigation College , Xiammen
Language Proficiency:
English , Chinese , Taiwanese
Computer Literacy:
Microsoft Visual FoxPro , Microsoft office ,Windows ,etc
Other Activities:
The director for the Master 's Union of the Taekwondo at the Jimei universtiy , Xiamen
Special Skills :
Taekwondo
Introduction :
- Good learning skills and ability to challenge ,
also when working under pressure
- Team player skills
- Well-organized ,well-communicated
- Good and positive attitude
1、格式，像‘Language Proficiency:’、‘Special Skills :’之类用粗体黑字，还有排版，最好能用表格类简历模版。
2、求职意向一栏如果只有一个就写一个，省略etc
3、把工作经验放到教育介绍之上，另外这是重点部分，你写得过于简单了。
建议按这个格式写：
时间（暑假一次去掉用月份表示） 公司名（所在地去掉） 你担任的职位
工作内容：
1〉工作职责
2〉完成的任务
3〉如果有业绩的话也一并写上
4、FoxPro去掉，只写一句：懂得一般办公软件即可。
5、对于你最后那些优点的介绍最好能够在前面工作经验上体现以下。
就这样，至于语法之类的么，既然你爱好英文，想必已经很好，就不班门弄斧了，希望对你有帮助，加油。
我的看法是：
Job Objective不清晰.或者对那些行业不太了解.只是为了找个对口的工作.
具体什么岗位?有想过吗?五年之后要达到什么目标?你想在此简历中突出自己什么能力？
具体描述一下所列的工作或课外活动的内容和业绩.所领导的团队有多少人，实现了什么目标。
扬长避短.
最好都删去文中那两个etc.第一个etc显得你很迷茫，第二个不知你想说什么
computer skill.
add、post code和Martial Status不用写了.??)移前改为"XXXXX:".
1. "Job Objective: logistics and International trading ,etc" --> does not make sense on purpose. Either you will rewrite it as "Career Target: [what you wish to achieve in 3-5 years and then in the longer run]"; or do not write it at all.
2. You are fresh graduate with least work experience, so your resume itself is not outstanding no matter how you phrase it. BUT, your English is above average and your play Taekwondo well. So try to show off these two competency on your COVER LETTER.
3. "省略etc" --> agreed.
4."把工作经验放到教育介绍之上，另外这是重点部分，你写得过于简单了" --> truely can help improving.
5. "add、post code和Martial Status不用写" --> agreed.
6. "新浪下个正确的英文简历" --> There is NO absolutely correct template or format of resume in the world. Your presentation is ok already. Take on the advices from this page to polish it and you will be fine.
现在简历谁还这样写呀
都有固定的模式了
去新浪下个正确的英文简历的范本吧有word的