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　　ZHANG SIR:

　　I am SHEN WEI,30 years old of this year.Graduate from the river in July 1999 the jianxi state electronics industry college, the educational background undergraduate course, the profession is the calculator application.At the same year August is assume office in bright chemical engineering incorporated company in Jiangsu.July of 2004 because the company change the system, so resignation.Do to manage the work in some whole day in Suzhou chemical engineering business enterprise afterwards.( produce the chief supervisor)

　　The work career:

　　August of 1999- July of 2004 bright chemical engineering in Jiangsu incorporated company company( the chemical engineering industry) value is long
　　The work description:
　　1, according to the work that plan complete to be on duty
　　2, handle the abrupt affairs
　　3, moderate the business of a section

　　The business enterprise( the chemical engineering industry) of up to now some day produces the lesson chief supervisor in July 2004
　　The work description:
　　1, press to produce the step, the public work lesson to maintain plan, a lotus of the logistics lesson plan, establishment produce the production plan of the lesson.
　　2, the match quality control section, aim at the product quantity, modify the craft parameter
　　3, speed up a section of car to make the good 5 Ss, press ISO14000 and the ISO9001 request performances.

　　Train the circumstance:

　　1, study a and maintenances of the system of DCS in the University of Zhejiang in October 2001.
　　2, the most advanced ion in the study Germany in the haijing chemical engineering group film system alkali technique in Shandong in November 2001, come back the successor value long one job
　　3, be assume office in the some whole day chemical engineering business enterprise in July 2004, and in July- September at often the familiar reason faculty of engineering study Japanese.At the same year September- the one who leave for Japanese oversea technique studies the academic association study business enterprise management in February 2005, serving as to produce the lesson chief supervisor after return to country, and the company that the advanced management mode of Japan took now.

　　Technical ability and certificate:

　　1, can use the company's simple communication of English and outsides.
　　2, can use the company's simple communication of Japanese and outsides
　　2, well-trained operation calculator and related equipmentses of ability, can use to transact to automate the software to carry on the article, form and scan the processing of etc..

　　Personal characteristics:
　　Oneself work execution, don't drag along the mire to take the water, work earnest, patience with quiet attention;Be engaged in to manage the work contain many years, having the management experience of the modern business enterprise.Hope at a has the pressure, there is challenge, there are stable work inside the good group and developments of aggressive.

　　Because the contract expected, doing not think to continued to float the in the foreign land, wanting to return to the taixingto seek a work Anne is safe and steady of work, come in sight of the job advertisement of your company on the net, so want to try and see.Hope to give me an opportunity.

　　The post that I want to accept appointment is one job of" produce to plan the member" that your company provide

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下面的是because
兄弟,实话
找个英语系的改改
错误太多了

张先生最好说:MrZhang
毕业应该是：graduated from
江西：JiangXi
electronical industry才对