查人人中国名人网双线信纸:帮我看看这篇介绍哆拉A梦的英语作文有没有语法上的错误，或者帮我修改得更完美．．
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Hi everyone,today i will talk about my favourite cartoon .He is name is Doraemon ．He was born on September the third ,2112.But he got the modern world by magic machine .Now he is lives in a boy's home and make friend with the boy called Daxiong .The boy always meeds problems .But Doraemon will help him in time .With the help of Doraemon.The boy can come over the difficult things well .But sometimes , Doraemon makes the things worse . Doraemon loves Dousha Cake very much and he will hide away when he sees the mouse ,so he hates the mouse very much .When he won't eat his favourite food ,then he will became so angry .
I like Doraemon very much .Because he is very lovely and he always makes me happy .帮我看看这篇介绍哆拉A梦的英语作文有没有语法上的错误，或者帮我修改得更完美．．
I like Doraemon very much .Because he is very lovely and he always makes me happy .帮我看看这篇介绍哆拉A梦的英语作文有没有语法上的错误，或者帮我修改得更完美．．
1.he is name is....我想你是不是敲错了,应该是his name is ,对吧?
2.Doraemon的出生日期是不是有错误,2112?
3. now he is lives....应该是is living ,那么后面也相对是making friendS,朋友最好用复数.
4.meets 不是meeds
5.困难直接用difficulties就可以
6.他吃不到最喜欢的蛋糕,就会很生气,那干脆用when he can't,把then去掉,用very比用so好
你写得不错,加油.
now he is the best friend of a boy,Daxiong, and lives with his family.