苏宁yunxin下载:用英文翻译一封信.（不要用软件翻译哦）

小做纠正：
1，世界不是“world”,是“international”
2,博览城"Expo."后面的小黑点不能省略！！！！！！
3,职业技术学院："vocational"而不是“professional".学院最好是college
4,专业前面I am major in去掉"am".要么换成My major is .....的表达
5,印象impression不太准确，image才精确严谨！！！
6,附件enclosure是不对的，应该用attachment!!!!!!
7,合影：group photos

M/D/Y
Dear XXX:

Glad to meet you at Shunde International Mechanics Expo..

Above all，let me introduce myself to you. My name is XXX,I'm a soptomore of Foshan Vocational & Technology College. I major in Computer Aided Design and Manufacturing.I went for study here today.

By the way,how long have you been in China? Are you a productive designer in Guangzhou? What about Chinese image of you? Our group photos are in the attachment, would you send me yours?

Best regards!!

(your name)

Dear ***,

It's my pleasure to meet you in Shunde Exhibition City of World Mechanics today.

You didn't know me ,did you? Now,let me introduce myself to you first. My name is ***, and i am in my second year at Foshan Professional Technology college, and my major is Computer design and manufacture. Today I went there for study.

By the way, how long have you been in China? Are you making production design in Guangzhou now ?
Do you have a good expression of China? ok, well, the photos which we took together are in the accessory. Could you send me the photos of your own?

Wish you a happy job.

Dear ***:

I'm glad to meet you at Shunde World Mechenic Show Town today.

You didn't know about me , did you? Let me introduce myself. My name is ***, and being a second year student at Foshan Professional Technology college, and my major is Computer design and manufacture. Today I went there for study.

By the way, how long have you been in China? and you are making design for product In Guangzhou now ?
Does the China give you a good expression? ok, well, the photos with our inside is in the enclosure, can you send the pics you taken?
．

May flouent job

Dear...

I am very happy to know you today in the Shunde Exhibition City of World Mechanics. My name is *** and I am a second-year student in Foshan Vocational School of Technology. My major is the Auxiliary Design and Manufacture of Computers. My purpose to visit the exhibition is to learn. By the way, how long have you been in China? Are you doing the product design in Guangzhou? How is your impression on China? I attach the photos we took together today. Could you send yours?

With best regards

楼上几位最明显的是“大二学生”的翻译错误！都是直译！
大二学生：Sophomore （固定用语）
职业技术学院：POLYTECHNIC UNIVERSITY/Professional Technology college
我的专业是：my majoy is../I'm major "in"..
计算机辅助设计与制造：Computer Aided Design and Manufacturing（专业术语）

DearXX,...................................M/D/Y
I'm glad to meet you AT the Shunde Exhibition City of World Mechanics.

Let me introduce myself firstly.My name is XXX,I'm a SOPHOMORE of Foshan Polytechnic University/Foshan Professional Technology college.I'm major IN Computer Aided Design and Manufacturing.I went for study today.

By the way,how long have you been in China?Are you a products designer in Guangzhou?How is your impression on China?Our photos ARE in the enclosure,would you send me yours?

With best regards /All the best/Best Wishes.

(your name)