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When i was on (on改成in) Grade Six.Our class had a Christmas party.Some of the students sang and others played some interesting games.We ate lots of sweets and chocolates(去掉s),drunk (drank) hot drinks.One of us dress (dressed) up as a Father Christmas,gave us many cards and presents.we talked (talked with) each other, we all had a good time.

When I was *in Grade Six *, our class had a Christmas party. Some of the students sang and *the others played some interesting games. We ate lots of sweets and chocolates *and drank hot drinks. One of us *dressed up as Father Christmas *and gave us many cards and presents. We talked to each other*. We all had a good time.

当我在上六年级的时候，我们班举行了一次圣诞晚会。一些学生唱歌，另一些学生在完有趣的游戏。我们吃了很多甜点和巧克力，喝了点饮料。我们其中的一个人打扮的好象圣诞老人，给了我们许多卡片和礼物。我们彼此交谈着，我们过了一个很美好的时光。 THAT‘S ALL

当我还是六年级的时候，我们班开了一次圣诞晚会。一些学生唱歌其他的学生做有趣的游戏。我们吃了很多糖和巧克力还喝了很多热饮料。我们当中的一个打盼的像圣诞老人给了我们很多卡片和礼物，我们彼此交谈，我们玩得很开心。