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The plan of my new term
While enjoying my winter vacation, I’m also thinking about my new term.
As a student in Grade 8, a good plan is the best for me. Teachers usually say, “The 8th grade is next below Grade 9 and Grade 3 in high school”. So I must value the 8th grade.
In my new term, I’m going to study harder to get good grades. I’ll have better control of myself to keep good discipline. I want to study better in my Chinese, Chinese is always my weakness. If I want to get better grades, then I must study Chinese better.
Mom says, “To cost no money equals get money”. So I must study for passing the entrance exam for the best high school to enter.
While enjoying my winter vacation, I’m also thinking about my new term.
As a student in Grade 8, a good plan is the best for me. Teachers usually say, “The 8th grade is next below Grade 9 and Grade 3 in high school”. So I must value the 8th grade.
In my new term, I’m going to study harder to get good grades. I’ll have better control of myself to keep good discipline. I want to study better in my Chinese, Chinese is always my weakness. If I want to get better grades, then I must study Chinese better.
Mom says, “To cost no money equals get money”. So I must study for passing the entrance exam for the best high school to enter.
weakness不大恰当，应改为weakpoint，弱点，地道的英语
最后一句别扭
i must study harder to pass the entrance exam(高考吧？那你后面就不能用high school) in order to go to the better universty.
还有grade问题
get good grade你想说上个更高的台阶吧？
get better report
用grade不合适
语法上没什么错误，但是让人觉得文章很硬，不地道
我的新期限的计划
当享受我的寒假时候,我也正在想我的新期限。
身为等级 8 的一位学生，一个好计划是我的最好。 老师通常说," 第 8 等级是在等级 9 和等级下面下一个 3 在中学中". 因此我一定评价第 8 等级。
以我的新期限口吻，我将要更努力地学习拿好等级。 我将有较好的我自己的控制保存好训练。 我想要更研读我的华语语,华语总是我的弱点。 如果我想要拿较好的等级,然后我一定学习华语更多。
妈妈说," 没花费钱对手拿钱". 因此我一定为经过入学考试让最好的中学进入学习。
错误太多，属于CHINGLISH。现仅找两例错误，管中窥豹。
As a student in Grade 8, a good plan is the best for me.本句的句子主语同逻辑主语不同，是病句。
To cost no money equals get money.本句get应为getting.