查人人中国名人网中兴ba910root:英语不错的帮我修改这篇文章好吗？
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Dear Mr Green,
I see your factory CD(广告），I very like the job,I'm a fourteen boy student.I'm outgoing ,and I like talking with others.My favorive sport is basketball.So I usually write some stories about basketball.And I'm interested to interviewed players.I hope you can use me .
Sun
I see your factory CD(广告），I very like the job,I'm a fourteen boy student.I'm outgoing ,and I like talking with others.My favorive sport is basketball.So I usually write some stories about basketball.And I'm interested to interviewed players.I hope you can use me .
Sun
Dear Mr Green,
I saw your factory ads.I like the job very much.
I'm a student of 14 ,an outgoing boy.And I like talking with others.My favorive sport is basketball.So I usually write some stories about it.And I'm interested in interviewing basketball players.I hope you can give me the opportunity . Thank you!
Sun
你要应聘啊？这么小？加油哦~！呵呵
I'm interested in
I'm very like the job
I'm a boy of fourteen-year-old student
I very like the job-->I like the job very much
fourteen-->fourteen-year-old
I'm interested to interviewed-->I'm interested in interviewing
use--.think about employing
see->saw
I very like the job->I like the job very much.(very不能这样用)
fourteen->fourteen-year-old
to interviewed ->in interviewing
I hope you can use me ->I hope you can you me a chance.