巴塞罗那地铁怎么买票:帮我的英语作文纠纠错

Do you have a friend? Yes,(此处yes应该可以去掉，不然好象显的是在写2个人的对话似的) I have（HAVE改为DO）,her name is 123.
123 is a beautful girl.She has a（去掉A） big black eyes ,a red mouth,and a(去掉A) short black hair.123 always waer（拼写错误，应该是wear） a white dress and a pair of light shose（拼写错误，应该是shoes）,she looks like Angle(安琪儿）(ANGEL前面加an)
And she is a good and happy girl,too.We often go to school by bike.On the way,I feel happy when she told(前面用一般现在时，这里也应该用tells) some funny story to me.I feel happy she with me,I feel angry she with me,too. (这句话改为when i feel happy,she is with me;when i feel angry,she comforts me)
123 is my best friend ,Ilove my best friend.

My best friend
Do you have a friend? I have! her name is 123.
123 is a beautful girl.She has big black eyes ,red mouth,and short black hair.123 always wears a white dress and a pair of light shoes,she looks like Angle(安琪儿）
And she is a good and happy girl,too.We often go to school by bike.On the way,I feel happy when she tells some funny stories to me. (I feel happy she with me,I feel angry she with me,too.
这句没看明白,不知道你想说什么)
123 is my best friend ,I love my best friend.

Do you have a friend? Yes, I have a friend whose name is 123.
123 is a beautful girl.She has a pair of big and black eyes ,a red mouth,and short black hair.123 always wears a white dress and a pair of light shoes,she looks like Angle(安琪儿）
She is a good and happy girl,too.We often go to school by bike.On the way,I felt happy when she told some funny stories to me.I feel happy and angry when she is getting with me.
123 is my best friend ,I love my best friend.

a big black eyes 去掉A
waer shose拼写
told---tells
story---stories
I feel happy she with me,I feel angry she with me,too. 错误

a short black hair 无a
wears
shoes
told 改成tells.

I feel happy she is with me,I feel angry if she is not with me,too.

my best friend
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