linux命令大全下载:谁可以帮我用英语翻译下这篇文章吗？谢谢

楼上的基本上对。有几点建议。

1. park, not pard. 相信是typo.

2. The pard opens between April to September, 7 days a week, from 10 am to 6 pm. The price is $15 for adults, $7 for children, and you can also spend only $28 for the whole family.
这段比较chinglish. 是不是这样改：

The park opens daily 10 am to 6pm from April through September. Ticket price is $15 per adult, $7 per child, or $28 for family.

3. We has original.... 语法错误。 We have....

4. western, not westen, operats, another typo, operates;

5. operates all the day. wrong, 应该是 all day

6. You can book tickets on the internet, and you can buy tickets at a half price 30 minutes before the performance.
英文中这种句子通常用被动。 例如：
The tickets can be purchased on the internet... 诸如此类。

另外， 英文和中文不同。 不要用逗号连接两个独立的句子。 如：
We has original westen show every Saturday and Sunday, the performance begins at 2 pm and lasts for 2 hours.

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The park opens daily 10 am to 6pm from April through September. Ticket price is $15 per adult, $7 per child, or $28 for family. An original western show is offered every Saturday and Sunday. The performance begins at 2 pm and lasts for 2 hours. There are free shuttles from downtown to the park Monday to Friday morning, and all-day at weendends, and holidays. The tickets can be booked on the internet. Half-priced tickets might be available 30 minutes before the performance starts.

Public Yuan opens April to September, seven days a week, from 10:00 to 18:00, adult fares 15 dollars, children fare 7 dollars, then 28 dollars can buy family votes! Weekly 6, Sunday we have the original performances, performances at 2:00 from the start, continuing for two hours. Monday to Friday morning 8.00-10.00 a free bus traveling public from losing Yuan, holidays and long weekends are free bus traveling from urban parks. Tickets can be scheduled online, half an hour before the performance began to buy half-price tickets.

The pard opens between April to September, 7 days a week, from 10 am to 6 pm. The price is $15 for adults, $7 for children, and you can also spend only $28 for the whole family. We has original westen show every Saturday and Sunday, the performance begins at 2 pm and lasts for 2 hours. The free bus is 8 am to 10 am from urban to the park from Monday to Friday, and when it is holiday or weekends, the free bus operats all the day. You can book tickets on the internet, and you can buy tickets at a half price 30 minutes before the performance.

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The park is available 7 days a week from April to September,and from 10 a.m to 6 p.m .A ticket for an adult is 15 dollars and 7 for a kid,of course you can have a family ticket at the cost of only 28 dollars!We prepared the Wild West Show starting from 2 p.m ,which will last for 2 hours.There are toll-free buses for you ,from 8 a.m to 10 a.m on weekdays and full-time buses on weekends.All tickets can be booked on the internet.And half an hour before the start of the show,you may still get a 50% discout .

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