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Dear Teacher,
Hi, I'm XXX, my English name is Peter, I'm 12 years old and I come from WeiMing Road Elementary school. I like computers. I really want to attend the 43rd Middle school, because the teachers are great there. Also the students there are very nice, the environment is beautiful, it's just very awsome. Even though I'm not the best, but I believe I have the potential to become the best. Thank you for your attention.

Honorific teacher, How are you!I am a XXX, my English name call PETER,12 years old, I come from the clear road primary school of 维 , I like the computer.I want to go to 43 high schools very much, because of 43 medium teachers very good, student's character is high, the environment is beautiful, stick receive often, although I is not the most good, I have the confidence to become the most good, thanking you to pay attention to me

Honorific teacher, How are you!I am a XXX, my English name call PETER,12 years old, I come from the weiming road primary school , I like the computer.I want to go to 43 high schools very much, because of 43 medium teachers very good, student's character is high, the environment is beautiful, stick receive often, although I is not the most good, I have the confidence to become the most good, thanking you to pay attention to.

Distinguished teacher, you! I xxx, my English name is PETER,12 years old, I come from Military Road Primary School, I like computers. I would very much like to, 43 secondary schools, because of the 43 outstanding teachers, students high-quality, the environment, upon instructions from the regular bar, although I was not the very best, but I am confident that as the very best, I thank you for concern