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The story was alright, at least it was as best as i could write, the story doesn't only mention the above events, but also family relations and the unforgettable love, if you're not so great creative on the matter of love, i think you can use this movie to turn around. Because it seems this movie has a scenario of love that has never appeared anywhere else, or maybe i havn't watched enough movies.

But the ending of the story, it's not a final showdown, and it doesn't satisfy people that well, i hope you can make some edits after you see it.

The story involves god, but nothing over the line, don't know whether you'll mind, if not, we can always change him to Zeus or others..

I've seen many of your creations, i think it's missing those vast scenes, or maybe my story has a bigger room to develop, maybe.