韩语0基础入门:谁能把我修改一下英语作文？

写的是2004年考研英语作文。终点即起点的那个。
我英语很差，所以文中肯定有很多错误。希望大家指出来！谢谢！

As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, the hero of the cartoon at last has finished his race. However, it means a new beginning of another race which is waiting for him. He must go on running without giving up.

It goes without saying that the pictures vividly betray a truth--we should devote consistent efforts on our career.When we have made success, it is unwise to stop our step. What is necessary is that go on making effort to create a new achievement. If we only content our previous success, we can not make greater achievement.

I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following examples. It is known to us that the story of Fang Zhongyong which was written by Wang anshi ，who is a famous written in song dynasty. When Zhongyong was a child, he has written a lot of poem and everyone praised him. However, he only contented his previous achievement and stoped making greater effort on writing. As a result ,he could not written poem gradually and have become a common people. This leads me to the conclusion that we shouldn’t only content previous achievement. We should make new success through our consistent effort. Any people, who is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price