查人人中国名人网falogincn手机登录界面:请帮我看一下这段英文有没有语法错误
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Xiamen is a very beautiful city.It is green all year.It is a coastal city with windy most of all the year.In spring,it is warm.The people usually go rowing and fishing.Summer is the best season in Xiamen.It is very hot.Sometimes it is rainy.people like to go to the beach and go swimming.Xiamen is warm most of the time in autumn.The days get shorter and the nights get longer in autumn.The season in winter in Xiamen is windy.So the people only stay at home.
most of all the year .---ALL 去掉. 或者说all year round
The season in winter in Xiamen is windy. －－－－season改为climate 气候
most of all the year .---ALL 去掉. 或者说all year round
The season in winter in Xiamen is windy. －－－－season改为clima
注意标点
with wind
你写的作文不太连贯，最好用些过渡（连词）
no