核武国家最新排名:请求英语翻译

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请帮我检查一下,下面这段汉文的英语翻译是否正确?要修改什么地方?
汉文:
职业教育学校生源数量正在不断减少,并存在招生难、管理难和就业难等诸多问题。如何认识当前职业教育对象的知识现状及思想状况?结合职业教育特点和生存现状,职业教育学校如何承担提高劳动者技能和素质的培养?
英语翻译如下(是否正确?尽量按汉文原意翻译,请帮助改正):
The number of the students of professional education schools decreases constantly.There are many problems of solicit student difficult,manage difficult and employment difficult that exist in the schools.How to understand the current knowledge state and ideological status of vacational education students?Combine the vocational education characteristic and survival present situation,how does the vocational education school undertake to improve the cultivation of labourer's skill and quality?

decreases constantly:改成is decreasing recently。因为这里没有稳定减少的意思。

and there are many problems such as of solicitation ,management and employment:你原先的句子是有问题的。。。结构混乱。。。

Combined with the vocational education characteristics and the present survival situation,how does the vocational education school undertake the task of improving the labourer's skill and quality?

从句是错的,后面帮你精简了。。。

其他修改只是我的个人意见,呵呵。。。

1decrease2student difficulty,manage difficulty and employment difficulty

The student numbers of vocational education schools are decreasing constantly. Also there are many problems such as recruit students difficulty, manage difficulty and take up an occupation difficulty, etc. How to understand current vocational education objects' knowledge and ideology status? Combine the vocational education characteristics and exist situations, how can the vocational education schools be charged with enhance the cultivation of labourer skills and capabilities?

职业教育学校生源数量正在不断减少

The number of student who wish to go to professional education school afterward keeps to decline continuesly.(呵呵,是"生源"而不是"在校学生")

并存在招生难、管理难和就业难等诸多问题。

This is also accompanied by two of other difficulties which are the complexity of managing those student for the school and the hardness of getting a job for the student who afterward graduated.

如何认识当前职业教育对象的知识现状及思想状况?结合职业教育特点和生存现状,职业教育学校如何承担提高劳动者技能和素质的培养?

So ,to the people who really need the professional education,what is the real situation of their education level and what exactly do they want for their life and how would those professional education schools act as a working skill improve center accroding to the feature and the dreadful future of professional education?

职业教育学校生源数量正在不断减少
The number of the students of professional education schools decreases constantly. (太绕口了吧)
改成:
Student population of professional education schools decreases constantly.

并存在招生难、管理难和就业难等诸多问题。
There are many problems of solicit (solicit是动词)student difficult(solicit student difficult?),manage difficult and employment difficult (employment difficult?) that exist in the schools.
改成:
There are many existing problems in these schools, such as student enrollment issues, administration management and employment difficulties.

如何认识当前职业教育对象的知识现状及思想状况?
How to understand the current knowledge state (current knowledge state???)and ideological status of vacational education students(与汉文不符)?
***当前职业教育对象=学生(students)***
改成:
So how can we go about to know the students' progress in schools and understand the way they approach to their education?

结合职业教育特点和生存现状,职业教育学校如何承担提高劳动者技能和素质的培养?
Combine the vocational education characteristic and survival present situation,how does the vocational education school undertake to improve the cultivation of labourer's skill and quality?
(this makes no sense at all`~~)
改成:
Furthermore, it is important for us to consider how are schools going to improve teachers' skills and professionalism, on the basis that we still keep the essential features of our education system.

ok 每句话我都按照英中对照了 你看看 合起来是这样子的:
Student population of professional education schools decreases constantly. There are many existing problems in these schools, such as student enrollment issues, administration management and employment difficulties. So how can we go about to know the students' progress in schools and understand the way they approach to their education? Furthermore, it is important for us to consider how are schools going to improve teachers' skills and professionalism, on the basis that we still keep the essential features of our education system.