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iamsure999,
你的作文结构基本出来了,应该自己先练习写一下,这样你的印象才会深刻,写过的单词就会记得更牢.没有老师或是朋友可以随时伴你一辈子.你要学会独立办一件事.不懂可问,或是让人帮你修改.但是不可让人完全帮你翻译.那不是你英文老师让你写这篇文章的目的.
我帮你重新搭了个架子,再附上英文字库,你试写一下,写好后,可发到我信箱.我帮你看看.好吗?
题目(新教学楼)
1.简单描述你们的新的教学楼.(从外观到内在设施,)
2.说说你们在新楼好的感受或是有了新楼后可以做的活动.
3.把新楼的不足说出来.或是你心目中理想的教学楼说出来.
这就是一篇完整的文章了.
字库 word Bank

school building 教学楼
floor楼层
narrow狭窄
staircase楼梯
bathroom厕所
accident事故
avoid避免
helpful有帮助的
enlarge 扩大
multimedia多媒体
projector投影机

crowdy拥挤的
wish希望

This is the only answer I could give you.

I hope there are a lot of useful facilities for me to learn in our new teaching building.
For example, multimedia teaching projection can help us learn more vividly and more interestingly.
Also, there is a toilet on each floor,so the students do not need to spend too much time for this issue.
Finally, widen the staircase width so as to avoid excessive congestion and accident prone.

I hope that there are many facilities that are helpful for our studay in our new teaching building.For example Multimedia Teaching Projection ,We can learn to learn more vivid and more fun.Also, a toilet block, students do not need to spend too much time for this issue.Finally, down the staircase width is the greater, to avoid excessive congestion and prone to accidents.

I hope our new teaching building for me to learn a lot of useful facilities.For example, multimedia teaching projection can help us learn more vivid and more fun to learn.Also, a toilet block, students do not need to spend too much time for this issue.Finally, down the staircase width is the greater, avoid excessive congestion and accident prone.
怎么样，满意吧

我支持maryswallow的答案，真是好人！

我也认为还是自己写一下比较好，遇到不会表达的问一下，这样印象会比较深刻的哦！