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I can’t stand it
I don’t like waiting for a person. It makes me unhappy. If it happens. I will don’t go out with her.
I can’t stand that a man cuts in line while I wait in line. I think the man has no manner. And it’s the easiest to makes me bristle with anger. When it happens. I think I will tell that man” Do you know manners? If you know. Please wait in line. If you don’t know. That show you inferior to a primary school student” Maybe that is no polite. But in fact that’s very active. But I hope nobody force me to use this abrupt method.
我是一个初中二年级的学生,写的不好,请大家多帮助.谢谢啦~
I can’t stand it
I don’t like waiting for a person. It makes me unhappy. If it happens, I will not go out with her.
I can’t stand that a man cuts in line while I wait in the line. I think the man has no manner. And it’s the easiest to make me bristle with anger. When it happens,I think I will tell that man” Do you know manners? If you know, please wait in line. If you don’t know,that shows you are inferior to a primary school student” Maybe that is not polite. But in fact that’s very active. But I hope nobody will force me to use this abrupt method.
I will don't go out with her.改成I will not go out with her.
while i wait in line 最好是while i'm waiting in line
and it's the easiest to make(不是makes,to 后面用原型）
If you don't know, that shows（不是show) …
整句话最好是it shows that your inferor is just like a primary school student.
Maybe that is impolite(impolite 不礼貌的）
But i hope nobody (will) force me…或者至少是nobody forces
可能还有一些没找出来吧,错误满多的，不是我说你
继续加油！
If it happens. I won't go out with her.
插队是jump the line 不是你说的所谓的cut the line
....错误还有不少，你把word文件发过来，我给你修改下吧，你是在读高二？看水平