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The Olympic Games
The Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in two year's time.We're all excited because they have never been held before in China.Great many people will be visiting Beijing.It's a good opportunity to disseminate Chinese cultures.Most buildings were built in Beijing.And we 're still improve the environment.I think a lot of people want to visit Beijing in 2008.Of course,I also want to visit.Because the Olympic Games have great attraction.I hope the Olympic Games will be succeed.
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谢谢
The Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in two year's time.We're all excited because they have never been held before in China.Great many people will be visiting Beijing.It's a good opportunity to disseminate Chinese cultures.Most buildings were built in Beijing.And we 're still improve the environment.I think a lot of people want to visit Beijing in 2008.Of course,I also want to visit.Because the Olympic Games have great attraction.I hope the Olympic Games will be succeed.
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谢谢
Great many people will be visiting Beijing.
--Many great people will be visiting Beijing.
Most buildings were built in Beijing.
--A lot of buildings are being built in Beijing.
And we 're still improve the environment
--And we're still improving the environment.
I hope the Olympic Games will be succeed.
--I hope the Olympic Games will be successful.