查人人中国名人网施工流程图:高手帮忙,这段汉译英翻译如何更地道呢,谢谢了!
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我叫贺东，大伙都叫我“阿东”，视足球为最爱。数年前结婚的，爱人叫“彤彤”，对我很好，还给我生了个儿子，叫“琳琳”，家人其乐融融。我发自内心感谢他对贺家做出的贡献，“女人确实很伟大！”。
儿时发小，乔洪峰，都叫他”阿乔”，长的帅气，外形冷俊，酷爱篮球，尤其是百米飞快，和他这么多年，发现只要他在百米跑道，冠军就没旁落过。属于运动型的帅哥吧。
人生没有我俩这么巧合的了，按出生年月日，我正好比他大一个月，自然我是大哥了，从小到大我们一直在一起念书，就连大学都是在同一体育学院念的。
The story took place at one of cities in the northeast of China. Time flies. It's twenty years since we have grown up .
I'm He Dong, Everyone calls me " A Dong". My favourite sports is football. I have been married for three years. My wift is “Tong Tong.”，who is helpful to me. Being kind to our son ,"Lin Lin, who was born on May 1. 1995. We are happy together. I thanked for her what she did it for us from the bottom of my heart. Woman is wonderful, who can hold half of the sky.
One of best pals of childhood, Qiao Hongfeng, other people calls him "A Qiao", He is tall ,thin, good-looking boy, being craay about basketball. esecially being good at running. When I studied with him,
I found that he would get the champion if he was running in the one hundred metres . What he did it was cool !
What a coincidence ！According to the date when we were born，I was one month older than he was. So , I was hi s brother. From the childhood to the adult of period, we were studying together. Even college , was entered the same it.
以上是我的译文,希望得到更好些的译文，谢谢各位!
我只想说点个人的观点：
1. 关於结婚，你不能用过去持续时态，你那意思是结婚结了3年；
2. 第一句我觉得太生硬，你看可否这样？The story happened in a city of the northeast China. Time files and twenty years past, we have all grown up.
能力有限，错了请多原谅
1.The story happened in a city of the northeast China.Time flies and twenty years past, we had all grown up. (楼上单词写错了,要用had,说明已经完成)
2.My favourite sports is football. I have married for three years ago. My wife is “Tong Tong.”(注单词评写,结婚是完成,但并不是被动)
3.My wift is Tong Tong who is helpful to me.( 它是整个句子,不要逗号)
4. I thanked to her what she did for us at the bottom of my heart. (此句已有what代替宾语,应省it.介词for和from有争议,我建议用to和at)
5.Woman is wonderful who could hold half of the sky. (此句该用虚拟,因为是假设的想象)
6. Qiao Hongfeng, other people call him "A Qiao",(people 是集体名词,只用复数形式,所以用call)
7.being crazy about basketball(单词crazy,介词about有争议,我建议用of)
8.esecially being good at running. When I studied with him, (简单点就可以了,esecially running就好了)
9.I found that he would get the champion if he was running in the one hundred metres race.(你既然有了the 那么后面就加上race,说明指定)
10.we were studying together. Even college ,we were the same.(没有主语,最后一句)
尽个人意见!望请参考!