东风风神ax3怎么样啊:英语文章~急！！

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怎么这么苯啊,第2就好象就错了
应该是but i want to do a good bay
还有really really hard,可以改成reallys hard或very really,
我改的也许不对,毕竟3个星期没说鸟语了,如果错了,原谅一下

a ten dollar bill

Sam waited patiently in the long line at the grocery store .He had come to pick up a few items for his mother.He often did chores for his parents after school.He enjioyed helping out at home.As he waited ,he daydreamed about the new camera he wanted to buy .He wanted to buy it soon because his family was going on a vacation,and he wanted to take pictures of their trip.there was only one problem .He needed seven more dollars buy the camera.His lawn mowing job at the Smith's should provide the money shortly .
Suddenly ,Sam was rougly shoved aside .He recogniced Mrs Sanders ,an unkind and unfriendly person who lived on his block .She had shoved in front of him without even smiling.Just as Mrs.Sanders received her changeand her prechanses,a ten-dollar bill flew out of her hand and fell at Sam's feet .Mrs.Sanders,however,was too busy criticixing hte cashier for his slowness to notice.
AS Sam bent ot pick up the money he thought quickly.The money did belong to Mrs.Sanders,but she deserved to lose it after the way she had behaved,and ,with it ,hicould buy the camera..