查人人中国名人网那家4s店好:帮忙修改一下
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My new friend:
Nice to meet you.
I am a studengt from China . My name is Sunlu . I 'm 13 . Now I am studying in Class 7 Grade 7 of NO.7 Middle school in Dagang . Dagang is a borough of Tianjin . Tianjin is a city as New York , but it is smaller than New York .
Last week , our English teacher told us how to use English to write letters . So I want to have a try . Maybe there are some mistakes in the letter,but please read it . Thank you.
I wangt to make a friend with you , can I ? Next time , can you tell me some thing about yours ? I’m not good at English , so I want you togive me some advices on how to learn English well . Do you have a computer ? Maybe we can send letters on the internet . My mailbox is : lucy_sun178@yahoo.com.cn
We are having winter holidays at home . It’s to boring . I have a lot of homework to do . The Spring Festival was very early . So , we begun our holiday very early , too . School begins on February 20 , I must do my homework quickly .
I am not good at playing sprots . I like swimming , but I can’t swimming well ; I like playing basketball , but I can’t play it well . Oh ! Do you like NBA ? I like it very much . The athlete of Rocket Houston : McGrady , he is so great and lovely , right ? Who’s your idol ? D o you know “ Rain”? He’s a singer from Korea . He ’s very cool .
I hope you can make a good result on your study .
A girl from China
2006-2-9
Nice to meet you.去掉，这是面对面的用语。
of Tianjin ---》in Tianjin
as New York -->like New York
how to use English to write letters -->
how to write letters in English
some thing ->someting
yours ->you
advices ->advice
letters ->e-mail
to->too
playing ->去掉
result on -》result in
拼写错误就不指出了，外国人能够看懂
borough应该替换成district
Tianjin is a city as New York中as改like
our English teacher told us how to use English to write letters 换成told us how to wirte letters in english
can you tell me some thing about yours中yours改you或改your city
I wangt to make a friend with you , can I ? 中friend改复数，can I ?改may I 或could I
Maybe we can send letters on the internet 中on the internet 改by internet
mailbox改email
We are having winter holidays at home 改I am spending winter holidays at home
so I want you togive me some advices on how to learn English well改成could you give~~~
advices改单数
The Spring Festival was very early 改This year,Spring Festival came earlier.
我要吃饭了，其他小毛小病没啥大问题，重要的是外国人应该看得懂
My new friend: (把“:”改为“，”，因为“：”是中文书信格式）
Nice to meet you. （去掉，见面用语，可改为“hello")
I am a studengt(studengt拼写错误）from China . My name is Sunlu . I 'm 13 . Now I am studying in Class 7 Grade 7 of NO.7 Middle school（school要大写） in Dagang . Dagang is a borough of Tianjin . Tianjin is a city as（as改为like) New York , but it is smaller than New York .
Last week , our English teacher told us how to use English to write letters(改为how to write a letter in English) . So I want to have a try . Maybe there are some mistakes in the letter,but please read it . Thank you.
I wangt(want) to make a friend with you , can I ? Next time , can you tell me some thing(改为things) about yours ? I’m not good at English , so I want you togive me some advices on how to learn English well . Do you have a computer ? Maybe we can send letters on the internet . My mailbox is : lucy_sun178@yahoo.com.cn
We are having winter holidays at home . It’s to boring . I have a lot of homework to do . The Spring Festival was very early . So , we begun our holiday very early , too . School begins on February 20 , I must do my homework quickly .
I am not good at playing sprots . I like swimming , but I can’t swimming well ; I like playing basketball , but I can’t play it well . Oh ! Do you like NBA ? I like it very much . The athlete of Rocket Houston : McGrady , he is so great and lovely , right ? Who’s your idol ? D o you know “ Rain”? He’s a singer from Korea . He ’s very cool .
I hope you can make a good result on(on改为in) your study .
A girl from China
2006-2-9
I am a student from China
Now I am studying in Class 7 Grade 7 of in NO.7 Middle school in Dagang .
Last week , our English teacher told us how to write letters with English.
I want to be your friend
Next time , can you tell me some things about yourself ?
It’s too boring .
I am not good at sprots
I like swimming , but I can’t swim well
My dear friend:
Nice to meet you.
I am a studengt from China . My name is Sunlu . I 'm 13 . Now I am studying in Class 7 Grade 7 of NO.7 Middle school in Dagang, which is a borough of Tianjin . Tianjin is a northern costal city, which is one of the most important ports of China.
Last week , our English teacher taught us how to write letters in English. So I want to have a try . Sorry if there are some mistakes in the letter,and please help me make progress. Thank you very much.
I wanna to make a friend with you , could I ?
M in winter holidays now. I have a lot of boring homework to do . The Chinese Spring Festival was very early this year; So was our holidays . School begins on February 20 , I must do my homework.
I am not good at playing sprots . I like swimming , but I can’t swimming well ; I like playing basketball , but I can’t play it well . Oh ! Do you like NBA ? I like it very much . The athlete of Rocket Houston : McGrady , he is so great and lovely , right ? Who’s your idol ? D o you know “ Rain”? He’s a singer from Korea . He ’s very cool .
could you tell me something about you? I’m not good at English , so I hope you would give me some advice on how to learn English well . Do you have a PC ? Maybe we can send letters on the internet . My E-MAIL address is : lucy_sun178@yahoo.com.cn
my best regards!
looking forward to yr reply!
yours Chinese girl Lucy
除了上面提出的，基本可以,不过有些单词拼写错了.