2017酒店行业市场分析:速求一篇英语短文

楼上的仁兄是不是有语法错误啊??
他的想法不错哦,我就在此基础上改进吧~~~~

among such the various sports,swimming is my favorite sport.because of the followings:
firstly, swimming is very interesting.each summer,there are a large number of people swimming in the sea or country rivers.next,nowadys,with the popularization of the idea that more and more scientists take it for granted that swimming is the most healthy and effective way of losing weight,more and more people choose swiming when losing weight.
finally,swiming is one of the most convenient sports like running ect.contrary to some sports we do not need to pay for the equipments to swimming .
if u are looking for an interesting sprot,swimming must be your best choice.

MY FROVEITE SPORTS IS SIWMMING ,I THINK IT IS VERY INTERSETING !~ AND I OFTEN SIWMS IN SUMMER!~` THAT MADE ME FEEI VERY COOL AND INTERESTING!`SO I THINK IF YOU WANT TO FING AN VERY INTERSETING SPORT, SWIMMING SOUNGS LIKE THAT!`MAYBE YOU DO NOT THINK SO,BUT I AM AFRAID THAT IF YOU LEARN TO SWIMMING,YOU CAN LOVE SWIMMING !`