体育馆施工方案:帮我修改个人介绍!

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Self Introduction
□cookieme
Now let me introduce myself.
My name is Xu Lilu. I am an active boy with easygoing tempers, so I have lots of friends who make me happy everyday. As a teenager, I’m fond of music & sports. I love sports, because it makes me more energetic. I love music, for it lets me fell cozy & placid.
My strong suit is writing program. I love computer very much, and I won the first prize in NOIP2004 (National Olympiad in Informatics in Provinces). That’s maybe the best return of my paying out.
As well as computer, I love singing. And I think I have a good voice. In my spare time, I often listen to pop-songs, not only Chinese songs, but also English songs or Korean songs. What’s more, I often play musical instrument just as flute or guitar when I’m in a good humor.
As it says “Life is not all beer and skittles”, but I think life is not all books either. I like hiking; I like the flesh air & great scenery. The world is wonderful, and I wish that one day I could travel around the world with my parents.
My maxim is “Life is sweet.” Though we often meet difficulties, but life goes on, and I still stand. The path to glory is always rugged. So I believe that “tomorrow will be better.”
That’s all.
准备参加高校招生面试!

有点中国式的英语,但总的来说条理还是清楚的。

应该只是口头陈述的,里面的拼写错误就显得无关紧要了。但要避免用太复杂的句式或生僻的词语,因为你的目的是要让面试老师听得自然。

提一些小的建议:
easygoing - easy-going (easy-going tempers显得有点别扭,不妨直接说 I am easy-going and active, so ...)
everyday - every day
楼上说的 music 和 sports 的陈述顺序有道理。
placid - 略生僻,尤其是后半部分不能重读,音节太少,冷不丁冒出这么个词,别人不一定马上听懂,其实可以用 peaceful 或 calm
suit - 在这里不通,是想表达自己适合做的事吗?
return - 或许用 returning 更合适
of my paying out - 用 what I paid out 更符合英语习惯
as well as - 这里应该用 besides,句子最后加 as well,或者把前半句 as well as ... 放在后面
just as - such as 或 like
in a good humor - 什么意思?
flesh - fresh
maxim - 不好发音,其实不用这么直接,你可以说 I believe ...
though 和 but 不要连用
rugged - 有点生僻,容易发错音,不如用 tough 或 bumpy

表现出自信、说得流畅就可以了,如果没有大的问题,面试老师不会对你的介绍内容本身提出太高的要求。

先说音乐再说体育.I love music, for it lets me fell cozy & placid.
I love sports, because it makes me more energetic. 与I’m fond of music & sports对应。
别的都挺好的。找工作呢你?祝你成功!!