查人人中国名人网戴氏被灭门心意拳失传:谁帮我看看我翻译的行不行？
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我的翻译，谁帮我看看，翻译得行不行？
I often find myself trying to explain the attraction traveling holds for me. Traveling, according to many people is uncomfortable and even, at least sometimes, dangerous. But one benefit of traveling is that it creates a perfect atmosphere for the observation of life, an environment that can lead to better understanding and enlightenment. Many wonderful people and places lie on the road ahead. The fact that there are obstacles as well only makes the journey more rewarding. My life and my memories will be enriched after encountering these people and places. That’s a pretty big benefit.
我发现自己经常会试图解释我为什么会被旅游所吸引。旅游对于大多数人来说是不舒服，甚至有时候是危险的。但是旅游的一点好处在于它为我们观察生活提供了一个很好的氛围，为我们更好的理解与领悟提供了一个环境。很多精彩的人和物在前方等着我们。路途中的险阻也只是令这段旅途更加得值得回味。我的生活与回忆也因为这些遇到的人和物而变得更加得丰富。这是一个非常棒的好处。
I often find myself trying to explain the attraction traveling holds for me. Traveling, according to many people is uncomfortable and even, at least sometimes, dangerous. But one benefit of traveling is that it creates a perfect atmosphere for the observation of life, an environment that can lead to better understanding and enlightenment. Many wonderful people and places lie on the road ahead. The fact that there are obstacles as well only makes the journey more rewarding. My life and my memories will be enriched after encountering these people and places. That’s a pretty big benefit.
我发现自己经常会试图解释我为什么会被旅游所吸引。旅游对于大多数人来说是不舒服，甚至有时候是危险的。但是旅游的一点好处在于它为我们观察生活提供了一个很好的氛围，为我们更好的理解与领悟提供了一个环境。很多精彩的人和物在前方等着我们。路途中的险阻也只是令这段旅途更加得值得回味。我的生活与回忆也因为这些遇到的人和物而变得更加得丰富。这是一个非常棒的好处。
前面的都很不错！但最后一句不怎么好“真是受益匪浅！”或是“ 这是很有收益的”啊！