查人人中国名人网重庆格斗:这个句子怎么修改更通顺？
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1.In my opinon,some materials in the course book is improper.Ican fand two examples.
2.We are just trying to make study more funny and interesting.
2.We are just trying to make study more funny and interesting.
1.In my opinon,some OF materials in the course book ARE POINTLESS. Ican FIND two examples.
2.We are trying to make study more interesting.
2.We are trying to make study more fun.
In my opinon,some materials in the course book is improper.,which i can fand two examples.
i agree with the 2nd sentence
In my opinon,some materials in the coursebook are misplaced.Here are two examples.
2.We are just trying to make study more interesting and entertaining.
It can be corrected :1,In my opinion ,some materials in the course book are improper,for examples:--
2,change "study" to learning.