伽拉卡斯 单刷:各位英语高手帮帮小妹改改英语演讲稿！谢谢啦

the war is over!？
The anti-Fascist war ended in 1945, 60 years ago. The Chinese People will never forget August 15, 1945, the date on which the Japanese government announced its unconditional surrender.
Japanese militarism collapsed. The Chinese people won the final victory .And it is the first complete triumph for China in its 100-year-odd history of combating aggression and achieving the nation's liberation and independence.
The war is over，but we paid dearly for this war. The bloody battles brought to all over the world is only sorrow、fears、death and poverty. 战争带来了眼泪、恐惧、死亡、贫穷……
The war is over，but Japanese Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi always visit the Shrine, which honours 14 Class-A war criminals. The shrine visits has deeply hurt the feelings of the people of all countries that suffered from the aggression. 那显示着军国主义复辟。
the war is over，but the Japanese government deny and distort its history of aggression. The new textbook whitewashes Japan's invasion of Asian countries, regardless of the fact that the Japanese militarists committed countless atrocities in its 14 years of invasion. They attempt to shirk war responsibilities by confusing right and wrong.
The war is over，we are longing for peace. But How can we shake hands with a nation which never dare to face the history? How can we embrace them who made us suffered so much? How can we open our heart and try to bridge with which deliberately plans to keep China under control? The hurts are not so easy to heal, the only way for them is remembering the history，engaging in deep and positive reflection in the face of countries and backing their words with deeds……Only in this way, Japan can achieve peace and development in the future.
All Chinese shall learn to say “No” and make concerted efforts to build our country into a prosperous and strong country, it’s a vital reflection of patriotism, isn’t it?
The war is over？No. The war of terrorism、race riot、resources plundering is around all of us. Looking back on history, we ardently hope that the horrors of war will never be repeated. Let the soldiers come back，let the wives hold their husbands’love，let the children live with happiness，let the world be peace for ever，let the war be over！