江西农业大学北区邮编:还是短文揪错，辛苦大家了！

好的~没问题~

1. the Dong Si Street
the去掉~因为Dong Si 不是一个英语单词~如果是~人民路的话就要加the了~the People Street因为people是一个单词~
2.A woman was hitted by a bike when she crossing the road.
第一种改法~
A woman was hitted by a bike when crossing the road.把后面的she去掉~直接用分词做状语~
第二种改法~
A woman was hitted by a bike when she {was} crossing the road.
加一个was~才可以组成句子啊~
3.And the onwer of the bike was too scared to realize what has happened.

时态有问题`！既然前面是一般过去时了~后面怎么可以用has呢~？改成had~!

4.and the women wasn’t hurt bad.
the woman~!打开快了吧~不是复数~！

5.I can’t tell clearly but I suppose it was because the women ran the red light .I think it’s a warn that walkers shouldn’t ignore the traffic rules as well.

还是一样~woman~~~~
warn~该成warning比较好~

1.不应用account ,应该用lesson (from)
2.hitted-->hit
3.crossing-->was crossing
3.on the middle of-->in the middle of
4. onwer of the bike-->the bike owner
5.has happened->had happened
6.luckily-->Fortunately
7.bad-->badly/that much
8.I couldn't give the detail but I guess it was because the woman crossed road when the traffic light was red.It is a warning to us pedestrians that we should never break the traffic rules.

首先，account是对的，表示陈述，这里应该是一个目击者对发生的交通事故的目击报告吧？
改错开始：1．crossing:前面应该加was或者干脆省掉she;和上面那位兄台说的一样；
2.还是和上面一样，应该把：And the onwer of the bike was too scared to realize what has happened里的has改成had;
3.the women wasn’t hurt bad中的bad应改为：badly,hurt是动词，所以应该在这里用副词修饰；
4.it was because the women ran the red light 应该为：it was because the women had run the red light 过去完成时；
5.I think it’s a warn that walkers shouldn’t ignore the traffic rules as well.
这句话中的“warn”应改为“warning”因为warn是动词……
还有就是我个人觉得那个as well用得不是地方，听起来一点都不自然……可以把as well去掉，在I think it's后面加上also...或者把as well去掉，在这句话前面加上Moreover...
文中还有些拼写错误，一般都能辨认的，就不多费口舌了……

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