查人人中国名人网佛山入户:英语改错
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used to some show their admiration for her and
___
others being shy when they saw her A summer,
when ___
Jane was thravelling abroad,and she went into a cafe ___
in a small town,sat down and waited to be served,The ___
young waiter was talking to anyone at the bar when ___
she came in,and at first he was not paid any attention ___
to her,because he has not looked at her properly,Then ___
he turned round and saw how beautiful it was,His face ___
went brightly red,and he hurried over to take her ovder ___
Jane was (a) very beautiful young girl,so she was quite ___
used to some show their admiration for(改为to) her and ___
others being(改为be) shy when they saw her. A summer, when ___
Jane was thravelling abroad,and(去掉and) she went into a cafe ___
in a small town,sat down and waited to be served.The ___ (此句没错）
young waiter was talking to anyone(改为someone) at the bar when ___
she came in,and(改为so) at first he was not paid any attention ___
to her,because he has not looked at her properly.Then(改为when) ___
he turned round and saw how beautiful it（改为she) was,His face ___
went brightly red,and（改为then) he hurried over to take her ovder(order) ___
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Jane was (a)very(young)( beautiful ) girl,so she was quite ___
used to some show their admiration for her and
___
others being shy when they saw her ,A summer
when ___
Jane was(travelling) thravelling abroad,and she went into a cafe ___
in a small town,sat down and waited to be served,The ___
young waiter was talking to (someone)anyone at the bar when ___
she came in,and at first he (did)was not paid any attention ___
to her,because he (did)has not looked at her properly,Then ___
he turned round and saw how beautiful (she)it was,His face ___
went brightly red,and he hurried over to take her(order) ovder ___