请原谅我 黑木琴音:英语翻译

Winter vacation passed, most let is the Spring Festival which I was unforgettable that one day. This day, I return to the native place, reunites with the family member, grandfather keeps me eats. Evening, I also put the smoke fire, this one day passes very substantially

" Winter vacation was finished, the unforgetable da is the spring festival. That day, I back to my hometown, get gether with my family, my grandpa left me for meals. In the evening, we played some firework, what a busy day! "

" The winter vacation passed by, make me unforgettable most is a Chinese New Year that day.
This day, I return to old house, having a reunion with close relatives, the grandpa stay I have a meal.In the evening, I still display fireworks, leading substantial this day."
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寒假过去了,最让我难忘的是春节那一天.
这天,我回老家,与亲人团聚,爷爷留我吃饭.晚上,我还放烟火,这一天过得很充实."

The winter vocation has passed by. What makes me unfotget is the spring festival.
I returned home to gather with my family that day. My grandfather wanted me to have dinner with him. At night, I also displayed fireworks. It was really a substantial day.

The winter vocation has gone, the most unforgettable day for me is the Chinese New Year day.
I returned to my blighty that day,and reunited with my relatives. My grandpa stayed me for a dinner. At night, I also displayed fireworks. What a substantial day.

寒假过去了,最让我难忘的是春节那一天.
这天,我回老家,与亲人团聚,爷爷留我吃饭.晚上,我还放烟火,这一天过得很充实."

The winter vacation has passed,the most unforgettable day for me is the New Year's Day.
On this day,I retured to my hometown and had a gather with my family,my grandfather wanted me to have dinner together.In the evening,I played fireworks.What a busy day !